Horrid House - Poem Renewed
One of my favorite poems I have written is Horrid House. I wrote it somewhere around seven years ago, so I decided to revamp the writing and add a bit more to the story. Also, this will be my first podcast, so if you feel up to listening, enjoy!
Horrid House - Renewed
I.
Away for a while
But still there
Their senses linger
Through the air
Howls of silence
A gentle feeling
Laughter of anger
Through the ceiling
Painful thoughts
Of whats still there
With a wonder
You’ll be there
What will come
With this journey
Pain and tears
Or bliss and cheers?
II.
As you enter
The night begins
With wraiths waiting
In the darkness
Scared and frightened
You slam the door
Locked, bolted
Can’t endure
Ghosts still wonder
From ancients past
Getting closer
You see their masks
Footsteps louder
Creeping near
Pan left, pan right
Nothing there
While you turn
A shadow appears
Running as quickly
As your tears
Weeping violently
You smell the air
Blood and urine
Fill the atmosphere
You creep forward
And stroke your hair
You feel something
Not so fair
Goo has fallen
From your hair
Wailing louder
You must stare
Look ahead
Nothing to see
Groans occur
Now, Blood of sea
Running faster
Across the room
Something’s coming
But cannot see
As you run
You see a light
Somethings glowing
But not bright
You see a mirror
Across the hall
You see writing
Upon the wall
“The horrors came
To seek revenge
Their lives were taken
By our forsaken”
“To cure this curse
You must do worse
Take this knife
And do your worst”
You grab the knife
And hold it tight
Ripping bowels
From your side
Fall to the floor
And die slowly
You see the ghosts
A bit more clearly

jenn

July 15, 2008 @ 12:48 am
great. i wrote a poem about a haunted house called whispery haunts
WebbieStuffs

July 15, 2008 @ 1:39 am
I dont really have much stuffs with poems but i admire people who have the patience to make them and make them beautifully. Congratulations with the talent. Beautiful poem, this Horrid House..
Gary R. Hess

July 15, 2008 @ 2:08 am
Thanks guys. It is definitely one of my favorites, I’m gald others like it as well.
Tammy

July 16, 2008 @ 9:28 am
Very cool poem!
liza

July 16, 2008 @ 3:14 pm
i don’t have a talent for writings poems but i love reading them. i loved this one
Nairobian

July 17, 2008 @ 8:56 am
i love poetry , your poem was quite graphic and captivating
prerana

July 17, 2008 @ 10:52 am
awesome poem!!!…
Holly

July 20, 2008 @ 5:07 am
I love poetry, but just don’t have the talent, but certainly admire those that do.Very well written and made me feel as though I was there.
Well done.